|correct the mistakes in the composition|

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[1] As my sincere friends left, I'm now really very fear.

[2] I'm afraid of the changes in my mind, my temperament and behavior.

[3]Most of the people around me now is quiet senseless, even silly.

[4]I terribly feel that I'm short of imagination all the more.

[5]My courage seems have to be forgotten for a long time.

[6]Yeh... its the age of perplexity.Maybe I'm on the wrong path.

[7]I just want to take everything eazy.

[8]But I have some responsibility that I shouldn't, also couldn't abandon.

[9]I will continue doing my way, without any more thinking.
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请挑出这九句的语法错误，和语句不流畅之処{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}，并改正。

注：[9]想表达的是：「我将继续 做我的事/走我的道路/行从我的方式，不去想太多/不去做多余的思考」

1.第一名的话，really和very可去掉其中一个，典型的chinglish，真的很害怕。
2.可以去掉第二个my
3.is 改成are
4.加上评语I
5.改为seems to have been forgetten
6.Its改为It's
7.如果不是easy拼错了的话，试着改everything 为 things ,不确定
8.responsibility改成复数形式
9.doing in my way,without any more to think about